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"DEDICATED"
  by mz.i-20


BRENTAY got to me
physicaly
it was imagery
i mean reality
crazy
how he seen apart of me
now were we
traped in a love that i want to be
i love how i can cry at his feet
and ....
he dosnt think any less of me
is it what i want it to be
or is it a fucked up mentality
chasing me
i would replace time
just for us to be
saftly ...together
always forever
clever....
as i laugh ,cry ,forever
in hisd heart
together ......
he takes away my rainy weather
and ....i....never
thought
the love he brought to me
would have me so willingly
vunarable...
and the only thing keeping
my sainty
is the fact that will always be
saftly planted in my heart
the picture we drew
the work of art




this is dedicated to the love of my life some one who i thought would just be another face in my mind brentay boy i love you i will miss you and just because im moving doesnt mean my heart changed it mingd on what it feels for you
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Date Submitted: Jan 12, 2009 (10:02 AM)
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  dagirl2fly4hat...
10/24/09 (11:58 PM) 
This sme deep ish nice flow...keep that pen movin...

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