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"Deep Down Inside (#1 prior)"
  by Caramelnme


You treat me like a friend, but deep down inside
We both know what it is that you want.
I see you hiding the way you feel about me.
The way you look at me gives everything you think
as you look at me away.
Deep down inside of me is where you wish to be,
Till I pleasurably scream your name...
In my head I'm saying this sex is like a pandomonium
Legs there, hands here, my hair is everywhere.
You're where your heart desires, me on you and you in me.
I made your hit list, not to my suprise I was the only one.
what you lust after as your heart desires me.
Deep down inside I'm your #1 prior.
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Date Submitted: May 22, 2009 (09:01 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (2)
  Amayzn
05/27/09 (10:24 PM) 
you have a knack for storytell in your pieces.....vivid yet still paint a crefully drawn picture....great drop

  T.J.STA
05/24/09 (08:34 AM) 
Nice...real nice, the flow was smooth. A solid write hea, fellow poet.

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