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"Deep Is..."
  by D.O.X.


- This Poem was originally a response to the poem"WHAT'S DEEP??? (WRITING 4 A REASON)" by ROXIE
Deep is…….
A concept
A word
A phrase
that stimulates
a change in the ways
you view
your life
your nights
your days
sometimes leaving your mind dazed
and in a haze
because you’re simply amazed
distraught
a revelation causing the elevation of thoughts
so that you hear what they didn’t say
you learn what you weren’t taught
ideas that weren’t thrown, but somehow were caught
where you receive more than what was brought
you walk out with more than what was bought
paying for a little but getting a lot
when the words have meanings beyond their definitions
resulting in premonitions
daydreams & visions
ideas crashing in your mind giving a whole new meaning to head on collisions
when the line has over accomplished its mission
bringing about a full recovery of what was in critical condition
when the lyrical
manifest the spiritual
in the physical
causing mental miracles
resulting in the dropping of jaws
and a psychological applause that’s hysterical
and all you can say is......
That’s Deep!!!
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Date Submitted: Feb 07, 2008 (12:04 AM)
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  BSavvy
07/03/09 (12:06 AM) 
Definitely a hot piece...... Love it, you went all the way in with this one....

  big josh
04/03/09 (04:55 PM) 
another nice write bra

  loyaltyb6
02/13/08 (03:59 PM) 
ILL WIT IT I C DAMN MY HEAD IS SPINNIN 10 BABY

  .Always.Catali...
02/13/08 (02:24 PM) 
From begginging to end I fucking loved this piece...real talk...you should write like this more often...

  Sunshine ebony...
02/13/08 (12:03 PM) 
2 thumbs I agree now this is a great concept

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