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"definition of a man"
  by MR.INTUITIVE


Many different ideas imbeded in a woman’s head
”man”and it’s definition,is it how hung,small,tall?
Or how green and mint it’s conditions are?
How high he has risen or how short he has to fall
What’s the meaning of be a man,and how we stand…
amongs others? please explain to us,
the meaning, if you can…let me understand
we have to live to the perspective of a male to be “Wanted”
just you can hold our arms
swaggings your hips and be flonted
not yerned for if we are not wanted by the others,be hunted
picking only the ones that every other ladies need,can I proceed?
With your permission let me explain what a man is,im not conceeded
We just want feel like we are needed
not being dugged by the gold ding nails,looking for gold,until we bleed
with my warnings… you’ll heed it,
let me assuming that you have the ideas that “men are dogs”
are we that or is it you own perspective of yourself
if you’re a dog and I am one too
then why does it only makes sense to myself
females and “YOUR” male counters parts are alike
we both need each other no one wants to be alone by ourself
so lets have peace and share the same mind,now
she’s easy and bare it time to bust my grind,now
is that how you believe we think?
Well being a man since she’s already undressed herself
For me im going get a peace of her mind now
it’s true,well sort, but the things we do to get to
That part,has meaning to,but if you let a “can I hit from the back”
Pick up line, get to the point where your in bed with few men
Then… does that mean you’re just a dog as well as us
Ever seen a pitbull turn it ass to a poottle when its in heat?
Well when you want it, you need by any means,
it that’s just an example I’ll show,though…idk
So now,if we are dogs,and you’re our counter parts,
Add the sums up,then it mean your just a hoe
oh,idk i havent taken math class years ago
So don’t get made share opinions and views
Comments are uncessary,but if you feel this flow
Leave one,if I’m hitting it and you’re are too,then lets
All get high,write, fav,and suscribe and throw misassumptions on the flow…
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Date Submitted: Oct 27, 2009 (06:57 AM)
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  blakkrose
10/30/09 (11:47 PM) 
I hear you on this. In this qame/war/love of the sexes all must be equal. Women and Men aren't aren't playinq the 'traditional' rolse anymore. We all wotta step up to the plate. I understand it's not always the man to lame, sometimes the victim. i'm so qlad I'm female because I would stay qoinq to jail if a broad put her hands on me. lol Nice Counter part, Nice.

  Lady_Style
10/30/09 (07:19 AM) 
I like the way you expressed this...not every man is the same...and the same goes for women...i see where your comin from wit this though.

  dontnohow
10/29/09 (05:11 PM) 
I dont think all men want to fell needed.. at alll....

  fame monster
10/27/09 (11:22 PM) 
deep mans ppl nees 2 start recognizin we victims too

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