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"Deliciously Mine (PE eating Challenge)"
  by ۞ F1 Wesley
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I’m in a D.S. mood (lil erotic) by ۞ F1 Wesley


Straight from my flight
I took the limo waiting for me at gate four
To my surprise HOUND was sitting in the back
With all his clothes on the floor
I was like
“oh really?”
He said
“Oh hells yeah, come and eat me”

He sat back
Legs cocked open
With his dick in his hands I leaned in
For the unspoken
I had to go for the nut sac first
I had to show him how wet my mouth was
For some balls-in-mouth thirst
I swirled them around with my tongue
While he tapped the top of my head with his tip
Just for fun

Looking up from my dick-balls nest
I see the look of pleasure in his eyes
I lick the entire length of his dick
While positioned between his thighs
See…there’s an art form to licking a dick so big and fat
There’s humm you must do while wetting it up front to back
Spit on it
Wet it all up
Get it ready for this fabulous mouth fuck

I pop in an altoid mint
Cooling my mouth
I take him all the way down my throat while he praises:
“That’s what the fuck I’m talkin’ ‘bout!”

Now…yall may not know how long my tongue actually is
I have HOUNDS entire dick in my mouth
While my tongue licks his fat balls the business
I’m doing the figure ate with my neck
Goggling his tip with sensuous pecks
Humming on the dick the fucking alphabet

My wet neck retracks
While my cheeks has Hoover suction
I got him exploding in the back of this Limo
With 6 head jerking motions

I’m swallowing every ounce
His dick’s so sensitive with every car bounce
HOUND just hold the back of my head and pound
My mouth is lusciously yours
As your dick is Deliciously mine
I can get oral with you
Each and every
Time…

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Date Submitted: Oct 28, 2009 (10:37 AM)
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  santiago\\\\\\...
11/01/09 (10:15 PM) 
truly a piece for the archives im feeling this palomita but mainly because of the content being that i am a man with an oral fixation lol you are def. on my list lady i gotta go now but i will return as soon as i finish toya's

  floatingonthev...
10/28/09 (02:04 PM) 
wow, this is so .... intimate? nicely written for how erotic it is... .. I like how you set this all up like a story in ur poem, I am not too sure what else to say.. lol. i'm kind of sitting here with my mouth open.. lol.. like what the hell did I just read?? Ha.. it was a great write,,,.. :)

  HOUND79
10/28/09 (12:32 PM) 
Its clear you know exactly what to do to a dick baby shht.

  HOUND79
10/28/09 (12:31 PM) 
You most certainly woke up my dick with this oral treat. I got a fiscal meeting to attend I cant walk in there with this boner lol.. Loved this.

  Athena317
10/28/09 (11:09 AM) 
girl.. preach on wouldja! you know the bg is perfect! and my eyes are burning from all this artistic expression! you know I love reading you!!

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