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"Departure"
  by Tiku


In the prime of our times
You left citing an obscure reason
Leaving the birds of mistrust
Shuffling its wings in the prison

Of my heart; where once your
Tear tainted face got engraved
In a page of my guiltless life
Promises broken were saved.

Who do you think is yours?
May be your ego and vain.
Love died in the alter of wealth
And I bled and cried in pain.

A simple heart has been drawn
Into the whims of a beauty
Unaware of the grave sequel
For worshipping a false deity;

I could have new dreams
To lift me through the abyss;.
Believe me; no one would ever care for you
And would say ‘She is just an ordinary lass.’
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Date Submitted: Jul 13, 2009 (12:02 PM)
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  Palliative Poe...
08/01/09 (10:13 AM) 
i loved this everything about it you jus had a great flow and really drew me in to what you were saying

  Chainz.
07/13/09 (12:07 PM) 
wow this was a in all serious great write, the word play n the words you used to describe your feelings was just simply amazing and the 4th stanza that was pretty deep and the last 2 lines i also felt pretty good I'm gonna have to favorite this write anyway, 10 stars

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