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"Depths of Time"
  by Queso
  - This Poem is a response to the poem AS GOOD AS IT GETS by Tragic


in an instant
i can find more of myself
a chain of esteem driven wealth

by the minute
i allow maturity and aggression
a mingling of these thoughts never burdened by recession

quite frankly
i enjoy the melody my life plays next to yours
a perfect collaboration of reminiscence and hope

in time
i will surpass the contrary opinion depicted through my lineage
a force, not violent or rampant yet maddening and spiteful

before the end
i ridicule the theory of ungratefulness toward I
a laugh and wink towards the bright rays of adversity

and soon
I shall lead a polite, unregretful existence into the depths of the new
a walk deep into the crevices of individuality and rebirth
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Date Submitted: Dec 26, 2008 (04:30 PM)
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  Sweetz487
01/26/09 (11:11 PM) 
"Before the end I ridicule the theory of ungratefulness toward I, a laugh and wink toward the bright rays of adversity" .....TOUGH!!! definiately a dope write.....im diggin the swag wit the reference of time to each metaphor....Excellent work 10 starz, GodBless

  Tragic
12/26/08 (04:41 PM) 
in time i will surpass the contrary opinion depicted through my lineage a force, not violent or rampant yet maddening and spiteful. - this got me thinking the write overall is really good. And im looking forward to our collabo ight? strz pce

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