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"Die another Day"
  by Sunshine ebony10290
  - This Poem is a response to the poem If i die to tonight by Neo X


Too many dreams for me to let go,
So much love in me to lose,
I understand to unforseen occurences,
That keep Satan amused,
But I'm not ready to go yet,
There's so much I wanna complete,
I wanna be able to reach the stars,
And show them off for all to see,
"Live fof the day!"
"Live for the day!"
Is all I hear,
I'm just not ready to die,
Death is what I fear,
I'm too young, so lost,
I wanna find out why I'm here,
Before I die, I wanna get that clear,
I wanna go to that paradise,
But right now I'm hear to stay,
I'm not ready to come yet death,
I rather die another day
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Date Submitted: Jan 14, 2009 (10:23 AM)
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  DeepThinker7
03/26/09 (11:15 PM) 
A polar opposite view point but with a positive take on it; I dig it... keeping my eye on your mental ink. Like the flow... 10 stars... keep pushing and empowering others.

  Miss Self Suff...
01/14/09 (10:51 AM) 
I hear ya! i repeat this in my head all the time. nice way of putting it.. 10*s

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