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"Dieing Slowly"
  by neisha91


She sits in the dark
Wit tears slowly coming down
Wondering what she has done
To be lost in hurt pain

She sits alone locked in her room
Listenting for the rite time
The time to relieve the pain
The pain and hurt she is lost in

She listens as her parents leave
Shes alone in her dark room
Being tormented by the words
That have trapped her in hurt pain

She tells herself she's nobody
That everything she do she gets yelled at
Feeling as nobody loves her
How said it is to be trapped in hurt and pain

She turns the music up
So no one can her screams
As she cuts herself
She watches the blood
drip
drip
drip

Knife in one hand gun in the otha
She tells herself itll better wen she's gone
They dont miss her now they want me miss her then
Knife in one hand gun in the other

She sits bawled up in the corner
Crying for someone anyone to help her
BOOM!!!!
Its to late

Her parents come rushin in to find thier daughter
Bawled in a corner
Knife in one hand gun in mouth
With blood drip
drip
dripping all around
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Date Submitted: Jul 15, 2007 (05:00 PM)
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  Lady E
07/22/07 (02:52 PM) 
damn i fell ike that all the time

  J Baby
07/18/07 (07:13 PM) 
damn that was hott I usely don't like poems that don't really rhyme but I loved this one I gottta give this ten stars and a add cause that was Hott I kno exactly how she feels except I don't own a gun

  tamara843chuck...
07/17/07 (11:18 PM) 
that ood 10 starz check out ma poems

  babesweetie
07/15/07 (05:14 PM) 
yea this is a really good poem hopefully its not about you or sumthing your welling to do great poem cant wait to read your next one

  Ray_Luver
07/15/07 (05:02 PM) 
O wow! Datz wuz a good rite an matter fact it reminded me of my poem "Suicidal Luv" which u just gotta check out.

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