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"Dirty Water keeps falling"
  by ThepureBlackpoet
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Dirty water by **Poetri Jones**


Even if it's just for one minute,

This is my Life, I'm asking gently,

Just allow me to live it,

Tornadoes, hurricanes, earthquakes,

Somehow I survived it,

With just a little of it left,

Cleans me please, this Life,

Allow me to revive it,

I know there's a hole in my bucket,

Please even if it's just an ounce,

I will still carry it, even for miles,

Dirty water keeps falling,

Inside my bucket, I will catch it..

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Date Submitted: Nov 05, 2009 (01:11 PM)
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  Μz Ρ...
11/05/09 (01:16 PM) 
wow ... you wrote this quick! A perfect response i want to be clense too. I like the inspiration in this too it keeps on falling but I keep on .. Great scribe a fav xx

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