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"dis life"
  by jadakiss


Where am I suppose to turn when shyt gets ruff?
I work hard everyday, yet its never enough

Worry about myself rite?

Itz easier said than done
I feel like life is pointless, yea the battle is won
But not by me because I'm not as strong as I thought I was
As soon as sumbody haz a problem "I got u cuz"
But what about my life?
What about dat shyt I see?
What about the things I try not to be?
I can only be me
And da shyt I do......mann it makez me feel like sucess iz impossible

Its funny how people judge you when they first see you
Its almost like they think they can "read" you
Niggas say " shawty you stay cuffed when I see you in da hood, I can tell cause you stay fresh dat ya life is good"
Little does he know, I'm trying not to give up on dis bitch

people think they would be happy if they had money....you wish
That's funny cause life iz life....either way u gonna deal wit da bitch
Fuck wat people say do wat you gotta do to be happy
Cause dis fuckin life I'm livin rite now.......(for lack of a better word) iz crappy
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Date Submitted: Jun 10, 2007 (12:36 AM)
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  big josh
02/17/09 (10:39 PM) 
yo shorty i kno exactly wat u mean, dis was a hot drop

  boheiman princ...
02/12/09 (09:08 PM) 
that was really good! so many people deal with this on a daily bases trying to please everyone else before they please them self but that was hot

  DOMINICANPOET
02/12/09 (02:02 AM) 
Niggas say " shawty you stay cuffed when I see you in da hood, I can tell cause you stay fresh dat ya life is good" <<<---DAMN THIS IS HOW PEOPLE THINK...you got nice clothes and a nice car...and you suppose to be living good..na i just work and take care of my own shit...but hot write mama as usual ten from me

  J3LLYB3AN
02/11/09 (10:36 PM) 
damn you ha me at the first couple lines!! crazy how you flowed on this.. liked it though for real

  hendley
02/07/09 (02:32 AM) 
i really kan relate 2 dis one..just keep ya high and keep0 workin hard..nothin good comes easy

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