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"Distant Lands"
  by A.Renee


Punch Drunk Love (Feat. Kanye West) - Common


{come on girl lets go
to distant lands unknown
we can fly all night
come on you're alright, wit me}

hey baby come wit me
my love will get u more buzz than estacy
me? im high off weed
i see ya big round ass bumpin to da beat
and then nice ass Ds jiggle when u dance
i jus wanna come and find a place to place my hands
but damn thats my jam and my man ask me to dance
when said yea he took my hands and said

{come on girl lets go
to distant lands unknown
we can fly all night
come on you're alright, wit me}

damn that girl got me noddin off
while that boy got me bobbin off....I cant take it
she got my vibin up
while he go my ridin up
i can go somewhere wit him, but anywhere with her
but i take turns, even when da love hurts
come on let's go to distant lands in our spaceship
i'm go wit dude first, then the girl is an experiment
i said to her

hey baby, am i crazy or was u givin me the eye
she said maybe, i say girl u crazy cuz i kno im 2 fly
i already kno im 2 fly
i already kno im 2 fly
i alrready kno im 2 fly
and i kno what u like

like girl i jus wanna see
what it is i can do to make you scream
if ya man wanna come, hes more than welcome
if you go wit me u gotta unbuckle ya belt cus
we doin it and doin it and doin it well
and we do tha nasty we be rockin tha bells
its like we in a distant land when we movin to da music
we in another distant land when we do it

{come on girl lets go
to distant lands unknown
we can fly all night
come on you're alright, wit me}

u can touch any where u please girl dont hesitate
u can kiss any where u want baby dont make me wait
u can lick and suck til i cum up
and i do tha same to da dude til he erupt
nall i aint im just havin a little fun
jus experimentin before im done
when he hit my spot, i like it alot
its just like hip hop it wont stop

hey baby, am i crazy or was u givin me the eye
she said maybe, i say girl u crazy cuz i kno im 2 fly
i already kno im 2 fly
i already kno im 2 fly
i alrready kno im 2 fly
and i kno what u like

{come on girl lets go
to distant lands unknown
we can fly all night
come on you're alright, wit me}



A.Renee flyin to distant lands
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Date Submitted: Dec 06, 2008 (10:25 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (20)
  big josh
01/23/09 (08:20 PM) 
lol dis was pretty good lil shorty

  Shy Gyrl
12/14/08 (12:18 AM) 
ok ok...u know im always feelin ya songs gyrl. You know how some songs u read, and they dont "exactly flow together? only sound good with the music? yeah i never get that expression when i read yours. u better open u an ascap account or somethin, or ghost write. im feelin this. And always introducing me to some new songs....this beat is kool as hell.

  Ab
12/13/08 (07:07 PM) 
That was hot!! U get hella Props for this piece. 10 Starz!!

  lilrazor
12/13/08 (06:58 PM) 
wow....good

  Wrighter
12/13/08 (06:38 PM) 
This poem is intriguing b/c it seems like you like both genders- and then you kinda just say "ur testing the water" or experimenting- either way- great write. xoxo wrighter

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