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""Do I Miss You?" (A response to Styles "Can I MissYou")"
  by Kiyoko


Do I Miss You?

Do I close my eyes
and hold back from crying silent cries
sing Muddy Water blues and
greet hovering night skies

Wishing
to hear that alto voice tone
that use to make me crave for you alone

Knowing
that you're only a phone call away
but I'd rather have you home

Do I Miss You?
Does 1 and 1 make 2?

Do I walk with emotional disguise
Safeguarding this mental time capsule
where only thoughts of You.. and I reside

While
Shunning premature advances made
and ...though my body aches
Still...
I refrain
Because visions of "We" ...
Incessantly Remain

So...Mi Amore

Do I Miss You?
......................

Yes ;-)

Im Still Waiting - Jodeci
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Date Submitted: Sep 29, 2008 (03:04 PM)
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  11th Wonduh
12/18/08 (06:25 PM) 
poignantly written. even though it is a response, it read as if it were spoken emotionally from the soul. nice write

  kinnaird
09/30/08 (02:55 PM) 
this was well done. very enticing and captivating. a well written piece that kept the reader interested throughout!

  LiL Chris 13
09/29/08 (10:49 PM) 
u got real emotional on this and i like the reptition u use nice write

  ManOfGod14
09/29/08 (04:30 PM) 
When the topic of a poem is a question, I am always anxious to know the answer. Needless to say, you did not disappoint. The write was flawlessly creative and you chose phenomenal words to display. 10 stars

  XPERIENCE
09/29/08 (03:37 PM) 
ok u got the jodeci playing setting the mood.. beautiful response here.... " Do I walk with emotional disguise Safeguarding this mental time capsule where only thoughts of You.. and I reside " hmmm i know i do that sometimes... wear a shield.... this was beautifully penned poet.. i truly enjoyed it and i know styles would love this response...

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