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"Do it Right"
  by La-La16
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I CAN DO IT RIGHT by J- ANIMAL


Ima open up baby and let you in
i wantchu to put it on me like you my ol' man
First time you did it wuz like damn
so go ahead papi and do it again
hit it from the front then the back
then tongue dive in
ima moan n leave scratches on ya back cuz you hittin right
this pussy you gone like
cuz my shit stay tight
like twista song said i got it wet but i can get it wetta
and baby if you wana change it up do summin different that makes dah sex betta
go ahead pa..experiment on me..i wont scream but i might move so i reccomend you hand cuff me
and hell yea i like strawberries & whipcream...
so if you gone do it do it right meaning put me to sleep.
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Date Submitted: Jul 14, 2009 (06:07 PM)
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  Realone
10/01/09 (12:20 AM) 
thatz whatz up right here

  J- ANIMAL
07/14/09 (06:13 PM) 
ohh shit ma you doin yo thing off my write i like this right here this shit goes hard

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