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"Do you see me?(HH Poisons Pic interp challange)"
  by Sunshine ebony10290


I can't look in the mirrior,
I feel like I lost my self worth,
The demons from my past,
Are holding the key to my future,
My heart is growin colder,
As I get much older,
And I'm trapped inside of me,
I wanna breakway,
I wanna be set free,
But the pain won't let go of me,
I'm sick of faking the happiness,
My life is such a mess,
No matter how much I cry,
No one will sympathize,
Will some one hear my cry?
Someone save me,
Hear me.
See me..............
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Date Submitted: Mar 27, 2009 (01:56 PM)
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  Embonpoint
05/26/09 (05:01 PM) 
I hear ya! Crying right along with ya! Beautiful emotional display Ma!

  Dana Dane... M...
05/08/09 (02:05 PM) 
This is aptly describes the way ive felt the past few weeks... i heard you loud and clear! I could feel the emotion.

  J.Hard
04/02/09 (02:33 PM) 
that's whats really good...heartfelt, nicely put...

  |.Dangerous Po...
03/27/09 (02:31 PM) 
this was very nicely written hun. great job on this challenge. powerful!

  B. Rose
03/27/09 (02:29 PM) 
Damn I feel you ma.... I feel you i feel like this alot lately yo... damn...

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