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"Dolly Love"
  by Lani


Believe me when I tell you
I’m still full of pain
I don’t think I can handle
Falling down again

My hairs all messy
And my clothes are full of dirt
So many tears in my eyes
And my hearts full of hurt

My life’s nearly over
As I’m passed on once more
My nose isn’t glassy
And my left leg is torn

But you still love me
And I try to deny
Even though I’m sick and tired
I still love you inside
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Date Submitted: Feb 26, 2007 (10:23 PM)
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  The Unexpected
03/13/07 (07:56 PM) 
Nice, I like the feel of your writing. it's so fluent. I look forward to seeing more of your poems.

  Ash 01
03/12/07 (10:08 PM) 
its so cool :)

  mykah
03/12/07 (09:09 PM) 
that is so cute. i love it gus...

  smash
03/08/07 (01:26 AM) 
beautiful

  lusciousNsexi
03/03/07 (03:47 PM) 
like the flow of this you are very very very talented

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