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"Dominance"
  by tyniee79


You can call me weak,
But you can’t say that I don’t move the earths’ axis when I speak,
Or bring the clouds together when I’m in need,
My determination will bring the skies to its knees,
Freeze pane it as the river,
Even deliver it has pain,
Or know it as my reasoning of being insane,
Or my reasoning of walking with a limp since no one is strong enough to be my cane…
So acknowledge my aim as ready deadly,
And my breath and hands calm steady
Under pressure;
Measure my intellect
And give attention to my dialect,
Follow my paths’ greatness,
And witness my existence reining as the greatest.
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Date Submitted: Nov 25, 2007 (12:58 PM)
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  FlyNina
07/22/09 (06:48 PM) 
''You can call me weak, But you can’t say that I don’t move the earths’ axis when I speak'' 10 stars

  PoeticSoulja
12/09/07 (11:12 AM) 
The wordplay was amazing.I see why you showcased this poem because its real inspiring.The lines went together so very well.Gotta give you respect for making this one.Everybody should take a read.Ten stars

  Miss Def Poet
12/07/07 (08:43 PM) 
i liked the flow on this .. "Measure my intellect And give attention to my dialect, Follow my paths’ greatness," love that line and the confidence you portrayed and ended this with :-)

  STYLES C.
11/27/07 (08:48 PM) 
The word play was insane fam..the message? loud and clear..10 from me homie

  erupt
11/27/07 (06:00 PM) 
yeah, I gotta give respect for this one. its hot.

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