I felt you from start to finish you captured my attention and damn if I wasn't shaking my head..... Don't ask if you really don't want to know, goes for so much.... Pen the pain, pen the pain..... Isn't that the truth.....
you def made the emotions felt by the reader in this.. the style really made that happen with the pacing and the back n forth w/emotions... the bg goes perfect... definitely feels heavy in this one... the truths exposed... can you handle it? I don't think most ppl can...