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"DONT!!!!!"
  by Nisha Nisha


*Near to the door*
*he paused to stand*
*as he took his ring*
*off her hand*
*all who were watching*
*did not speak* *as a silent tear*
*ran down his cheek*
*and through his mind*
*the memories ran*
*of the moments they walked*
*and ran in the sand hand and hand*
*but now her eyes were so terrible cold*
*for he would never again*
*have her to hold*
*they watched in silence*
*as he bent near*
*and whispered the words..*
*"I LOVE YOU" in her ear*
*he touched her face and started to cry*
*as he put on his ring and wanted to die*
*and just then the wind began to blow*
*as they lowered her casket*
*into the snow....*
*this is what happens*
*to man alive.....*
*when friends let friends....*
*drink and drive.*

I DIDNT MAKE IT UP .BUT I THINK THIS IS A PERFECT POEM
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Date Submitted: Nov 24, 2006 (09:10 PM)
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  Rocky
11/24/06 (10:38 PM) 
this is hot keep em coming

  **HOLLA**
11/24/06 (09:20 PM) 
OMG!!! Welcome to GS, what a way to start!!! Awesome poem, I too, am so AGAINST drinking and driving, mad props to you for this one... HOLLA!!!

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