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"don't enslave me in your thoughts...(SC One Line Challenge)"
  by Autumn joi


don’t enslave me in your thoughts
twisting my soul into your mind
choking freedom
with your tongue
leaving this body devoid
of its very essence

& reeling on the edge of an emotionless abyss

I am indifferent to the loss
[of me in you]
you’ve gained sovereignty over my heart
while i’ve become a refugee
with no longer a place
to call home

so my home is now in you
trapped
pacing the cage that is your mind
peering out at the world
through your windows

& there is no more me
only we
[but really only you]
& i collect the leftover fragments of what i once
called self

& burn them in the pits
of your bowels
where the ashes will wait
for your release
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Date Submitted: Jul 01, 2009 (12:59 AM)
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  Cornfed
07/26/09 (09:07 AM) 
Deep. profound, thought provoking! All thee above and more!!!!!

  TheUltimateCur...
07/11/09 (09:07 PM) 
Love defined: "The emotional dependence on a person place or thing" you've epitomised my definition right here! Well expressed!

  AR-15
07/08/09 (09:19 PM) 
Wow that's pretty deep and intense.. "i collect the leftover fragments of what I once called self, & burn them in the pits of your bowels, where the ashes will wait for your release"... thoughts run high here

  ladyvirtue
07/05/09 (04:23 PM) 
go girl. i really enjoyed this. this is very deep. keep writing.

  3rd_Coast
07/03/09 (08:03 PM) 
always a great write from you. wonderfully written... great metaphors and flow in this scribe. So true and real... Powerfully moving. definately 10 starz 10 different times. adding this to my favorites without a doubt

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