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"Don't You Know Your Beautiful?"
  by Wrighter
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Suicidal intentions or Just a bad Habit by PhAsEs


Don't you know your beautiful?
Past the situations you may have
Your beauty shines as bright as the stars in the night
Don't you see He made you ever so perfectly
Because you are a reflection of His love
Don't you know you were beautifully made
By the mold of His clay
And my His breathe He gave you life
So before you go and continue to damage
Your soul
By doing things that you know you shouldn't
And you claim your grown
But your too young to face your problems
So you drink, smoke, and cut yourself
Only to try to hide the beauty that you possess on the outside
Which seems to be tainted on the inside
But don't you know you are beautiful?
Now put away that blade
And find sometype of aid
Because if these words in my poetry
Doesn't make you see how beautiful you truly are
Then there is something really wrong
And if you think you can be as selfish as to say
That you are the only one that's been dealt this card
You are mistaken
But you see the others before you
Found that beauty covered deep
Beneath those scars and the smog
So grab hold of my hand
As I pray for an angel to come our way
To help me wash away
That deathly mentallity that
You are not pretty
Because don't you know you were beautiful the moment you were born?
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Date Submitted: Dec 31, 2008 (02:47 AM)
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  PhAsEs
12/31/08 (01:16 PM) 
wow i'm speechless this piece is something special nearly brought tears to my eyes ten starsz on da favorite list

  getchamndrite
12/31/08 (07:17 AM) 
wow...you get serious kudos from me for penning this one. I love your perspective. enlightened words down on this one. this is an intstant favorite..if everyone could view at least one person in their life this way.the world would be a different place.

  *~Raw Sensuali...
12/31/08 (02:53 AM) 
Every little girl is born into royalty... the daughter to the King of Kings...and that... makes her a princess... love the heart you extend to others so willingly lovebug... :) You're beautiful to me...

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