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"Don't You See"
  by MizzJess09


I understand that u are in greiving and that you are sad
But don't you see that u are not the only one that's in pain?
I see you drinking and smoking more and I can't stand 2 see u like this
When I try 2 talk to u, you lash out at me instead
Don't you see that by solving your problems with the bottle or by the pack
You are slowly killing yourself one day at a time
I just want u to see that you are not alone.
I am here for you but i guess u can't see that
But I will be here if u need somebody.
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Date Submitted: Jul 16, 2009 (12:07 AM)
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  The Clinician
10/03/09 (02:31 AM) 
A person has to want to change themselves before help can be granted. Seasons and reasons. Nice write.

  Trill
08/26/09 (03:29 PM) 
Your doing what any caring person would do.Sometimes its the things they use 2 make them lash out.It`s not you and sometimes people are 2 blind to see just that.Keep ur head up lil moma.

  KiNg-Go0B3r
08/11/09 (10:22 PM) 
hmmm a helping hand piece i digs iiit yo

  ivelihazel
07/18/09 (12:28 AM) 
hey u were tryin 2 b helpful nice write tho =]

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