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"Dream (2 Kireay) a note to the dead"
  by J Baby


He was there faintly but alive and well
I wish he were still here so to him I could tell
All of my dreams and wishes to
And him and me could have a friendship of truth
But it was a Dream with him as the star
Now I wish he had never got hit by a car
Dreaming of him is like dieing again
He wasn’t my man but a real true friend
Dreams with him make me cry
Because God took him for a reason he had to die
I never realized what I had until it was gone
Now every dream I have about him makes me feel so wrong
Dreams the main memory I had of him
Now I simply can’t get rid of them
Now I day dream of when we meet again
When we’re both in heaven with both women and men


I love you my nigga just know that’s the truth
And forever my friend I will dream of you
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Date Submitted: Apr 17, 2007 (11:02 AM)
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  Misz Poetic
12/03/08 (10:18 AM) 
loves this much

  Misz Poetic
05/15/08 (09:51 AM) 
Gurl u kno i loves u and ur flow, but that was the truth on realness. and u kno that erbody miss him as much if not more. so all i gots 2 say is keep ur flow goin an keep doin u. Loves u j baby!

  G-I-P (Gifted ...
03/15/08 (04:46 PM) 
A write like this goes so much further then just the physical he knows your love for him and believe me would be proud to have a friend like your in his life nice write, poetic peace

  Truessence4u
06/02/07 (10:08 PM) 
the title, the poem, the poet MASTERPIECES OF ART'S FOR THE HEART, and exquisite MASTERY TECHNIQUE..

  crent6
06/02/07 (08:28 PM) 
i like this poem alot its so heart touching and emotional 10 stars

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