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"Dream Girl"
  by Poetic Aquarian


I dreamnt of you since the first night we talked
Your smile, your personality, your eyes, they left me in a daze
I loved your smile, it lit up the furtherest reaches of my dark heart
And everytime you sent me a picture, I thought it was art
Because you are a masterpiece
You have to be, because only people like you come true in dreams

I dreamed of you when you called me your boo
And told me how much you loved me
I remember thinking how much I loved you too
How being with you meant everything to me
And growing old with you was how it should be
Holding your hand, looking into your eyes
Holding you in my arms so that if you died
Right there, it was like you already in heaven
Cause thats what you said I brought to you

I never dreamed that that day would come
I couldn't dream after that, my eyes stayed red from lost sleep
It hurt so bad, I was so sad, so mad, only wish I had
The chance to turn back the clock and stop
That series of unfortunate events like Jim Carrey
But eventually I fell asleep again
And you still remained in my dreams
Still with that smile, laugh, kiss, touch, taste, smell
Hell who was I kidding?
Pain is love because I was hurting and still in love
Wasn't ready to let that go
Wasn't ready to let you go

And I dream still
I dream of you being in my arms still
I dream of you holding after a long day
Telling me its ok and I can cry in your embrace
And that looking into your face, your eyes
That I loved you then and I love you still
I dream of you saying I do in a white dress and shoes
Being in bed with you from moonlight to sunshine saying 'oohhh'
I dream of you
Because you are my dream girl
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Date Submitted: Sep 06, 2007 (11:30 PM)
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  dejanee07
10/26/07 (11:35 AM) 
sweet poem. Its always nice to see a guy with a sweet side. The flow was easy a...and the rhymes were automatic...nice.

  BabyGurlNay
09/18/07 (11:48 PM) 
That was so sweet...who ever you wrote that for or about is real lucky to have someone like you around.....u have a very deep heart that is feel with love .....and dats just 2 sexy...

  Insatiable.ves...
09/10/07 (12:14 PM) 
that was a very heartfilled write...I think we all have that dream someone...and not all of us loose that person. A lost of a loved one that you connect wit on that level can be earth shattering. but its all abouit closin ur eyes and dreamin about the good times. great write.

  LiL_MiSS_JUiCY...
09/10/07 (11:36 AM) 
wow, thats deep... I like the way you wrote this... You make it possible for a girl to believe there is good men out there lol! You got talent sweetie, keep doin what you do, I like it!

  Leta Lea
09/08/07 (05:11 PM) 
This was to me (blushing) I know, I know. This was a very beauitful, peace. I really did like it

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