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"Dream Girl's Don't Settle"
  by Poetic Legend


I'm rare like a lunar eclipse
Brighter than the solar admits/emits
Huh
More spectacular than a star and a wish
I'm your dream man
Sex..fen fan
Global like espn and c-span..you leave me fee.nan....

Cause your my dream and..
We can ride together
The cloud..the moons..whatever
Tough like leather yet soft like feathers
It's chilly in this weather
I cook..come here baby...warm up with some chili in this weather....

Your Eyes become pixelized
From dramas traumatized
We can get so mesmerized
Scared and terrified
But when haters give the evil eye
Me and my dream girl just rock a bye
Elevate past distractions...make our love personalized
Because TV makes love look so commercialized....

So I ask you..
Dream girl who comes better
Ten inches...head strong..whose better
So I ask you
Why do woman settle
Sweetheart...sit back..listen..why would you ever
When your dream man can provide the letters
Baby I'm certified I told you I'm better
Rather you need me now or whenever
Car..clothes or cheddar
Ask..beg..you never..have to do that with me

My dream girl..It's picture perfect
Can your love see past the surface
To get a clue of the purpose
This is new love..but baby don't nervous
Watch my lips and read the verbiage
Dream Girl have courage...

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Date Submitted: Sep 18, 2008 (02:37 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 11/07/08 (07:52 PM)
Author: Dawn
Poem Title: Ya Dream Girl

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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  Lady_Style
10/22/09 (07:34 AM) 
A very strong write... powerful wit your wordplay...lovely ink poet! =)

  MeakaLove
12/20/08 (02:03 PM) 
I love your flow and your style is unique

  Tpoet
09/22/08 (06:49 PM) 
very creative write like the wordplay

  CC Miller
09/18/08 (08:21 AM) 
You should submit this one to ASCAP. I could hear it as a song. good slant rhyme, rhythm, vocabulary, alliteration. I'm goin to check out your page. something familiar about your style...

  mz_April
09/18/08 (05:01 AM) 
IM REALLY FEELIN THIS YA DID YA THAIN ITS POWERFUL AND JUST WOW GREAT WORK KEET THE INK FLOWIN

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