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"DreamBattle"
  by * ŔESURRECTION-X *
  - This Poem is a response to the poem DreamTrance by bumpy


Metallic warriors
Armed for battle
Angry at the conquest
Fully packed within every corner of my mind

This time
The Greens and Blues
Are blending now
The battle has commenced

Pronounced?
Indeed

Comprehension?
No need

It’s clear,
With the speed of the transferable light
Illuminating
As the war wages on for my mind
The brightness of my sun has been replaced
By the thunder of the cloud
Even in the heaven that pre-exists
The lightning emanates cracking within me

As the battle commences

I am still afraid and relieved


©2009; RUST ONE RICER


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Date Submitted: Mar 03, 2009 (03:11 AM)
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  Petrus Romanus
03/03/09 (03:35 AM) 
have a good, good war.

  bumpy
03/03/09 (03:13 AM) 
Quite masterful and actually a little curious that you understood EXACTLY what I was saying, however unclear I may have been. Very intriguing. Awesome though! I must admit...you took this to a whole different level.

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