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"Dreams"
A NEAL and Mints Collaboration


  Mints:

Well I'm here to tell you if you dont already know

That dreams are something that we all have even if they dont show

No matter what your occupation is or the problems you may face dreams is a sign of hope that can never be erased

Dreams can be magical and/or realistic

you can tell what peoples dreams are most of the tyme just by listening

I myself have many dreams you and I might have some in common

Like being successful, living good and going to college



  NEAL:

Dreams come in all sorts of ways.

Like makin money, diing, or gettin laid.

Sometimes i wonder how exactly are they made.

So in my memory i take a gaze.

My thoughts are somewhat clouded in a mystic haze,

and suddenly they begin to fade.

These dreams go beyond what i understand.

So I look to you, for help, my friend.

Do they tell the future, I ask my boi Mints.

Or are they jus somethin more like hints.

  Mints:

But you see the thing is people always shoot down your dream

They say their realist but really there just mean

Like everytime someone has a dream or a hope

there is always someone there that doesnt want to see you float

always someone there to try and sink your boat

the thing I've learn is to beleive in me

and say fuck the hatas, realist, or whoever they may be

  NEAL:

So ignore them fakes

And go at your rates,

You kno what to do, you got what it takes

Believe in me,

As I believed in thee.

Never flee, but set youreself free.

I know it can be painful, and i kno how it feels.

But you got to be you, and keep it real.

Its not as hard as it seems.

And i kno at times it makes your head steam.

But what can i say, they arent nobody elses,

They are only yours,

And that gives u the right

To put up a fight

And swim as far as u can down the stream,

Cause all in the end, they are your dreams.
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Date Submitted: Jul 22, 2007 (12:50 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/24/07 (03:09 PM)
Author: ~Debo-et~
Poem Title: Replay of a Dream

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comment icon  COMMENTS (14)
  M.B.S.
07/06/09 (02:01 PM) 
Neal that was ill definitely give u props on that 1.... mints ur flow could b a lil better but it was iight.....over all i liked the poem keep it up

  Jody
09/20/08 (12:46 PM) 
protect your dreams I'm with that! Don't let nobody take them away there yours to catch... enjoy your journeys... this was really nice. Kudos both poets... the line that sticks out for me tho is "Sometimes I wonder how exactly are they made" never thought about that... gotta me thinkin' now... how are dreams made? sugar n spice... lol, jk

  Lucky#7
07/30/07 (09:46 PM) 
this is real deep and true. i love it. great write.10 stars

  Ms. Hollywood
07/30/07 (02:32 AM) 
tha's right!! you have to make your dreams come true. your dreams are yours and nobody else's... so to those who feel like they have to hate on whatever it is you are trying to do... i say fuck em' and keep truckin.

  MissTruEssence...
07/30/07 (01:08 AM) 
I dig that...I love the meaning and message..MissTru..Keeping it 100, check my new one ..it's fiyaaa

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