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"Dreams"
  by the beautyofpassion


Im confused because it's you I dont want to lose
I love you so much but it's too hard to choose
Its either you or the dreams I had for a long time
I just can't seem to make up my mind
I worked so hard for this day to come
But is it worth me and you being done?
I don't know if I can let this oppportunity slip away
Its like my heart simultaneously telling me to go and to stay
So what do I do?
Do I choose you?
or choose my dream...
As you hold me in your arms, you look into my eyes,
and as we fall into this beautiful moment, I began to realize
how long Ive waited to meet someone like you
who would love me unconditionally no matter what the issue
You made it your priority to complete me in everyway,
to love me harder each passing day
Been through so many disapointments and heart breaks
lies, cheating, and heartaches
to the point where I forgot what it was like to dream
about a man that for me, would do anything
so I'v e reached my decision
and I've decided to choose my dream
I choose you
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Date Submitted: Nov 06, 2007 (01:59 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 02/14/08 (05:27 PM)
Author: THE REALIST POET
Poem Title: DREAMS DO COME TRUE

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comment icon  COMMENTS (21)
  Lady E
03/29/08 (10:37 PM) 
it wuz alright

  Prahduct
02/14/08 (11:28 PM) 
Awww Passion, I liked this right here, ya flow and resolution in this piece is warmth, keep penning hun....if nothing else is right this definitley is. -1

  THE GOD WAR-CL...
02/11/08 (04:30 PM) 
WOW. I MUST AGREE WITH EVERYONE ELES AND SHOW YOU MUCH RESPECT ON YOUR AWESOME POETIC SKILLS. KEEP ON WRITING QUEEN. YOU DEFINATELY POSSESS THE GIFT AND THE TALENT. 10 STARS....

  Marvelo
01/04/08 (01:48 AM) 
wow once again i fell in love with your word play. your flow was endless. I believe you are one of the greatest poets i have ever come across keep doin ya thang ma cuz you have mad talent 10

  gino
01/04/08 (01:46 AM) 
this good

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