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"Dreams part )ne"
  by Yung Proffo


As time goes on,
i have to make changes,
in the streets its hell,
and the murder rates is raising,
damn can we ever have peace like pac said,
its war in the streets and its war in the middle east,
im just tryna make a change like a malcolm x or a martin luther king,
or kareem adul who showed brotherly love in the game,
damn im so sick wit this main,
but its like the system don't want us to succeed,
thats why they put shit in place to destroy our dreams,
but through strength and loyalty we shall conquer anything,
we can make a change to better ourselves,
so what we not gucci, so what we not wayne,
its time to focus on are success,
people watch tv,
and they become so impress,
not knowing they are not living out their dreams,
they say they people high up have the lowest self-esteem,
but if thats true they wouldn't be doing big things,
man everybody out there should hold on to their dreams...............
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Date Submitted: Sep 05, 2009 (02:25 AM)
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Date: 09/05/09 (02:49 AM)
Author: LIFE'S POET
Poem Title: Dreams

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  piss a mofo of...
09/05/09 (06:26 PM) 
now i can see why my Bro Life had to create a response from your words, you are absolutely correct everyone needs to have 'dreams' and aspirations and to strive for and no we aren't on tv and have 'willy' lifestyles but 'we' the 'regular' people outnumber and outweigh those in that position..deep scribe!

  LIFE'S POET
09/05/09 (02:48 AM) 
deep bro inspired me to write a poem I will put it as a response

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