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"Drip, Drip, drip, drop"
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izakaya taxi_m20081209 - ichiro




Drip
.
.
drip
.
.
drip
.
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drop
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Pool into puddles
&
.
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(((Plop)))
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run-off's disorder
reality's distorter
.
.
Draining rain water
.
.
deposition decisions
recognizing religion
in prison meant stance
dancing imprisonment dance
.
.
initiating
.
.
it's dysfunctional romance
displaying in it's seconds
.
.
"Chance recollections"
.
.
peering in puddles
pondering a second shot
.
.
"Chance I'm befuddled"

when below my earth bubbles
water logging be causing
rot realizing where I
.
.
.
.

STOP

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Date Submitted: Jun 17, 2009 (11:14 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  MAVRICK
07/14/09 (08:55 PM) 
Love the symbolic philosophical projection portrayed in this write...your reference to water which is usually for purification but in this case went toward stagnation...nicely done

  Jody
06/27/09 (02:55 PM) 
just felt like crying from your POV

  LiquidFire
06/22/09 (09:12 AM) 
I can't say anything before I acknowledge the background, lol, call me strange but it seems eerie to me that it connects so well with the poem, looks like two eyes peering back at me with your words stained in themm now on to the poem, it reminds me of a person reflecting On something they wish they could pull themselves out of but there's no stable ground to stand on when its all said n done so they are just there, stuck. Peering at freedom

  D.K Lord of Da...
06/17/09 (08:45 PM) 
Now i know Im back when i step in here.. speachless ...creative inspirational are jus some words that come to mind....respect always DK

  drybaggij
06/17/09 (03:01 PM) 
sin quoted my fav part but yeah like fiya said, very philosophical indeed.

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