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"DROWNING IN MY TEARS"
  by Mama B


THE SIGHT OF YOUR FACE
LEAVES ME TERRIFIED.
THE SOUND OF YOUR VOICE
LEAVES ME PARALYZED.
THE SMELL OF YOUR SKIN
LEAVES ME MORTIFIED.
THE CHILL FROM YOUR TOUCH
LEAVES ME BROKEN INSIDE.

" FORGIVE THEM, FATHER.
FOR THEY KNOW NOT WHAT THEY DO!"
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU CHANGED
MY SUNNY DAYS TO MIDNIGHT BLUE.
I REGRET THE DAYS YOU MADE ME
FEEL AND TASTE YOU.
THEN, YOU TRIED TO FOOL MY FOLKS
TO THINKING MY CRIES WEREN'T TRUE.

YOU'RE MY BLOOD.
SO, WHY YOU GET ROCK HARD BY MY FEARS.
THERE'S NO WAY YOU COULD'VE DONE THIS
AND NOT THINK THAT SHIT'S WIERD.
YOU DIDN'T EVEN THINK ABOUT IT,
BUT IT TORTURED ME FOR YEARS.
IT'S STRANGE THAT YOU LAUGH ON DRY LAND,
WHILE I'M DROWNING IN MY TEARS.
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Date Submitted: Sep 18, 2008 (05:14 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (17)
  DeeDee525
08/29/09 (02:04 AM) 
i really enjoyed this! strong detail keep up the good work

  eli :)
08/29/09 (12:12 AM) 
good flow.

  SOULFULLY WISE
08/28/09 (10:38 AM) 
this is a very strong write. deep and filled with emotion. great write...keep perfecting r craft...u will affect many

  LadyKris
08/27/09 (11:57 PM) 
oh damn, wow, this was overflowing with emotion, great job in allowing us to feel what you feel and take a walk in your shoes

  Prettiladi
08/26/09 (12:41 AM) 
wow...soooo sad!!!! very emotional

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