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"dying dreams"
  by ARCH ANGEL
  - This Poem is a response to the poem exiled in doom by harley quinn/a fallen ang...


Exiled by doom
Pain has become obsessed
Emotions cease to triumph
As dark secrets are confessed
When dark comes to light
Karmas defense seems to rest
The love that once was
Seems to fade to nothingness
As the heart is thrown away
Why does no1 come to catch?
Pushed the world from me
Just to hold u to my chest
Sitting in pandimonium
On the broken swingset
Trying to jump to the past
To the starry night that we met
Walking through the fog
Guided by the moons crest
Waiting for an eclipse
But it seems sooner ide see death
Laying on the lilly\'d fields
Losing my last breath
Fading into the mist
As reality I now accept
Gone in the breeze
As the wind carries my last words
Wondering why the dawns light
Shines on me now differed
The futures is upon me
I have to live now without her
Passion like saphire
Inside me you\'ll always burn
What happens to a dream
When its not longer alive
Tried to make hope survive
But at least I know I tried
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Date Submitted: Oct 18, 2009 (05:17 PM)
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  The Clinician
10/18/09 (11:42 PM) 
Nice scribe my poetic brotha. This is poetry truly indeed. Keep inkin on and I\'ll keep listening.

  smooch
10/18/09 (11:16 PM) 
THIS WAS A BEAUTIFUL POEM LOVED IT

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