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"Edge of the Earth"
  by tyniee79


Unarmed
Unless the heart in my chest is considered my firearm,
Label it a threat of determination,
This hatred and segregation,
And how I’m facing and chasing
A theme of immortal powers in my dreams,
Label my best as effort,
Thy Sheppard,
Thy skies of rain and pain
For 365 days and nights,
365 days of blames and walking canes,
365 days of a fight within the shadows,
I battle with a fierce tussle,
Wrestle the cause,
Grapple with criticism and cause,
Cause the attributes of life to have cause;
These bars of immobilization,
The restrictions of conviction,
Confidence and certainty,
Certainly my sincerity is in doubt
And disasters are the words spoken silently from my mouth,
And my ground is the sounds of the earth,
I walk these lines until I walk off the edge of the earth.
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Date Submitted: Nov 25, 2007 (12:56 PM)
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  G!GGL3Z
07/27/09 (04:04 PM) 
dayum this piece is real i love it & they way u used yo words this is gangster 10 strz fo sho

  Mirage
12/30/07 (12:54 PM) 
Niiice.. Deep and so true.. This is the routine of life.. walkin and walkin sometimes even runnin.. untill we reach the edge of the earth..

  Miss Def Poet
12/07/07 (08:40 PM) 
this left me speechless.. i loved the entire write.. but these lines .. really grabbed me .. "These bars of immobilization, The restrictions of conviction, Confidence and certainty, Certainly my sincerity is in doubt And disasters are the words spoken silently from my mouth, And my ground is the sounds of the earth, I walk these lines until I walk off the edge of the earth."

  DamnNation
11/25/07 (08:31 PM) 
a very crazy poem but not many could ralize that this ar some of the things we go through life...great write 10....much love cab

  BIG CHIEF
11/25/07 (01:44 PM) 
this right here is crazy and deep i like it ..ten starz..keep that pen movin my brotha ..peace and hair grease

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