VeRy CuTe...iN JhUxT ThE LiTTLe biT Of WordZ YhU UsEd i CapTurEd A StRoNg EmOtiOn:) LoVe iT!!!:)

this piece was soft and pretty...well written...

i like this write. ur choice of words are so concrete/i believe each individual that reads this will realte it to a different emotion or situation. Simple but clever....if u dont mind im curious to know what situation YOU,personally wrote this one about??

You paint an interesting picture here. Good haiku. It sounds like an epilogue to something more detailed. Keep scribing poet and I\'ll keep reading. Peace and much love to ya.