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"Ehhh... ((Whatever Works))"
  by Ms. Sincerious


I never said Patron tastes good.

I just said--

“I like the way it makes me feel.”

That’s why I only take it--
Disguised
In lime juice –n- fruit peels.

*its sweeter that way*

Like the way
I only givc him part of me
even tho all of me is real.

cuz I never said he was right for me

I just said—

“I like the way he makes me feel.”

and I never said love sucks

I just said-

It’s lost its appeal.
.
.
.
Guess that’s why
instead of chasing it-

I’m at the bar

drinking with him

.still.

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Date Submitted: May 27, 2009 (02:10 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 05/30/09 (09:25 AM)
Author: LAB **Ms. Cool Whip**
Poem Title: Give it to me straig...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (9)
  LAB **Ms. Cool...
05/30/09 (09:07 AM) 
mama, i love the way you put this piece together, and the reference to the make and the drink...that was a nice *twist*

  mindbenda
05/29/09 (10:35 AM) 
wow the way you put love and patron together like that was tight i was deff feeling it... but u gotta take straight shots of patron girl lol easy ten starz

  LyricallyDelic...
05/29/09 (08:37 AM) 
This write left me reeling, girl I swear you've lived my loved affair, on the real these words came right outta my soul... Like the way I only givc him part of me even tho all of me is real. cuz I never said he was right for me I just said— “I like the way he makes me feel.”

  Poetry Love
05/27/09 (06:18 PM) 
absolutely... I am rather speechless here. I am in love with this poem. It is so simple. So few words but it comes together so nicely. Beautiful work. So deep and beautiful.

  piss a mofo of...
05/27/09 (05:18 PM) 
*KNOCKS DUDE OFF THE BARSTOOL NEXT TO SIN AND TAKES A SEAT*...I Hear you're looking for Mr. Right cum on with me and lets forget mr. right now..*kicks him while he's down*...superb metaphor used for this scribe Sin.

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