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"El Diablo"
  by El Diablo


(Can't believe I'm sharin' the true story...)

Oh so diabolical...
pronounced in Spanish
to emphasize the international terror
in ways that English cannot even capture.
People keep askin'
"Why do you call yourself that?"
I give vague answers,
though one barely got the sample
as if I was a new flavor to ice cream, ask Baskin
Robbin'...
That's where the shit began.
I had this hate in my life though it scoped out perfect,
perfection was the trouble,
a bit tongue gets you no where in respect to
what is wanted, as someone said to me.
It was no delinquent type of flow
Ace is what began at 12,
clean cuts enough to grab what is desired by the crew.
Reppin' tru blue...
6 tipped, blood killa,
brim ass niggas were my enemy
because...they hurt a part of me...

5 bodies.
20 shots.
Not high nor intoxicated,
Man...I wasn't even on my period.

I still ask for the man to forgive me.

Not a nick or a scratch on my body.

Of course, I am hell.

El Diablo.



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Date Submitted: Apr 30, 2008 (10:05 PM)
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  BROWNSKIN09
05/11/08 (09:32 PM) 
.....(SEARCHING FOR SUMTHIN TA SAY) YOU'VE LEFT ME AT A LOSS FOR WORDS... MORE THAN SPEACHLESS I CAN NO LONGER SPEAK 10*

  DaDutchezz
05/02/08 (09:22 AM) 
OMG...*SPEECHLESS*

  HazeyyyBabyyy
05/02/08 (12:05 AM) 
wow.... you created a lot of suspense in the beginning, and did not disappoint with your explanation at the end... true story or not this was deep... and the fact that u say its true makes it all the more interesting to read... even tho this write offers an explanation of several things, it opens up the door to a thousand more questions in my mind...

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