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  by LAB **Ms. Cool Whip**


Holding hands to influence hypotheticals
of true loves coat
offering warmth to cold eyes that have since lost hope

I demand

mandatory monogamous continuity

yet a lack of good men has us
comprimising our character
to accepted promiscuity

we take our places
roll the dice,

"give me while I take"
or my personal favorite
"Maybe its time to take a break"

Then hurt rises in eyes
as we both identify the lies

and try to act surprised

weve both drawn circles
in 'roll' play

Im not expecting you to stay..

selfishness led to actions of actions
that led it this way...

so,you coulda waited,
to hold that decision,
before you actually made it...
and saved me the mudafuckin headache

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Date Submitted: Sep 17, 2009 (09:23 PM)
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  The Clinician
09/25/09 (12:08 AM) 
Nice write poet. Keep inkin and I'll keep listenin.

  MzSpoon aka "T...
09/18/09 (12:13 AM) 
Would you say it?!

  Isis sun
09/17/09 (10:33 PM) 
smfh......this is one of those take it with me pieces....yeah..

  mikeb30
09/17/09 (10:28 PM) 
i heard tht.. love the ending..

  H.H. Holloway
09/17/09 (09:30 PM) 
accepted promiscuity... lol... well in a way, that's true; but hey, I'm no genius and/or master of relationships, but then I doubt any of are... *sigh* I guess all we can do is hope for the best and press on

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