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"EMPTINESS"
A C. Renegade and jae24577 Collaboration


  jae24577:

I AM AN EMPTY PERSON THAT IS SEEKING LOVE
I ONCE WAS HAPPY BUT NOW IM SAD
CUZ YOU'RE THE ONE THAT MADE ME FEEL BAD
I LOVED YOU ALOT FROM THE START
I ONLY WANTED TO BE DEEP DOWN IN YOUR HEART
TO BE REJECTED AND DISMISSED REALLY KILLED ME
I THOUGHT I COULD BE THE DOOR THAT U USED FOR A KEY
ITS SO MANY THINGS THAT WE SHARED TOGETHER
TO TRY TO MAKE ME AND YOU BETTER
U BELIEVED IN ME AND I BELIEVED IN YOU
I JUST NEVER KNEW WAT EXACTLY TO DO
WAS IT TRUE OR WAS IT UNREAL
ITS UP TO YOU TO START BEING REAL


  C. Renegade:

Start being real? That's the the only way to be,
You disappointed in me, am I empty? I agree,
how I feel, I cant describe, im torn, im confused,
it seems like I abused your love, but I dont wanna lose,
lose you, and lose all this, and then that spot,
in my heart gone be empty, so empty soon to start,
starving to be filled, love is real, love is hate,
love is pain, love is too much, I cant take,
I cant take all I go through, cant take being alone,
I cant take it when you're here and can stand it when you're gone,
Im so confused, I seem heartless, I seem wrong,
but I was just trying to fill my empty heart all along...

  jae24577:

WHEN YOU WERE HERE MI WORLD WAS BRIGHT
BUT NOW THAT U LEFT ITS DARK AND SLIGHT
I HEAR THE SOUNDS OF UR SWEET AND TENDER VOICE
JUST WONDERING WAT WILL BE YOUR CHOICE
WILL U COME BACK TO ME SOMEDAY
OR WILL U JUST GO ON AND FLY AWAY
UR HEART WAS SAFE WITHIN MI HANDS
TO SHOW YOUR LOVE WAS WRAPPED ON MI BANDS
YOU WERE MI LIFE AND ALSO MI LOVE
HOW COULD U TAKE IT AND GIVE IT A SHOVE
MI HEART IS EMPTY
CUZ ITS MISSING YOU>>>>>>>................
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Date Submitted: Apr 12, 2009 (03:14 PM)
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  MizTauruz11
04/13/09 (04:24 AM) 
it was kinda of confusing...like i felt like the poem wasnt finshed...or maybe it didnt end on the write note...but i get where you guys were going with this

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