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"Enchanted hopes"
  by after vision


Love
Oh how I want it
But sometimes I question
What I’m willing to do for it

Oh --- I want
The softness of your touch
But sometimes I question
Am I willing to give that much

Do I have the strength
To see past -- as the past
Do I have the energy to give to you
The same chance that I gave the last

I don’t want to see
What yesterday promised and stole
I don’t want to give
What I can’t control

All the times that I wanted to believe
Can you without question --- promise me
That you’ll live your life with my heart
Beating inside of you and yours inside of me

Enchanted hopes
Can you hold for me- for us
Can you love
Be the sum of you- that I trust

Can you never strike pain
To the core of my willingness to try
Can you not promise --- love
If you know that one day your love will die


after vision


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Date Submitted: Oct 26, 2009 (01:11 AM)
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  Syndel
10/29/09 (10:14 AM) 
see now sometimes we need to stop running at least so fast give a skip or two just time to catch up its going to get you anyway an when it does if only for the moment it feels just that good not to want to give up again

  Tonya
10/26/09 (11:33 PM) 
see this is my issue with it. im not afraid of it any more. i dont run from it anymore. But if i give you all of me...Can you give me all of you? and my thing is i would never ask for something im not willing to give...guess we just got find someone thats only willing to take what they are willing to give. good luck with that one...if i find him ill check if he has a sister...ok...a fav poet

  BrEeZyWrOtE
10/26/09 (04:32 PM) 
That\'s the hard part about love, you never know what will happen, if you will be loved back but you have to have faith in that person. It\'s a trust thing. Just make sure it\'s the right person before you dive in and take that risk

  *Miss Toya*
10/26/09 (01:31 PM) 
those last two lines went deep for me...that\'s what i always wish for...wishing a person can just be honest...don\'t promise me something you can\'t deliver... feeling this one...

  floatingonthev...
10/26/09 (12:54 PM) 
I really do like this, imaginative and clever the way you wrote it, I really enjoy the flow of this write. thank u for your comment and have a beautiful day.

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