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"Entwined"
  by BlessedOne





There they sat –
Naked and not ashamed
Entwined like living vines


…Heads upon shoulders...
…Arms wrapped around backs...
…Pelvics locked together...


Breathing in unison-
If not for the diverse pigmentation
You would not know where one began and the other ended


How they got there was not important
For, they had found each other and
That was all that mattered…


Growing together through endearment
Supplying remedies that both need
For healing to taking place


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Date Submitted: Oct 23, 2009 (09:33 AM)
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  Syndel
10/28/09 (06:38 PM) 
I like this you left me wanting more I kept going to the top and then the bottom I need a part two cause I was feeling this pic painted by your words

  RedLoveSong
10/25/09 (06:01 PM) 
The title was sexy all by itself, then add your words and that bg pic and you have a beautiful piece of art. This is a favorite and the title is a new favorite word as well.

  Shani. Medicin...
10/24/09 (08:38 PM) 
Love this one B1 its what I have prayed for and of course the old saying says, \"Be careful what you pray for... You might just get it.\" Well in this case I haven\'t gotten it so, why isn\'t the old saying working this time? lol

  ButterflyDream
10/24/09 (04:43 PM) 
This was such a beautiful piece of art,it said so much more than just what was written on the surface.I absolutely love the depth of this write and the background art was a nice complement to your beautiful words.Awesome job,diva:)

  LateefahFreeWO...
10/24/09 (02:23 PM) 
Beautiful and intricate piece. I love the picture that you paint with your words especially. Great ink!

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