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"Envoking of the Senses..."
  by bumpy


I see you
I see the elaborate browness of your skin
The hue of deepness
Exuberent in all your kingly ways

I smell you
I smell your heavenly scent and
The scent wafts in waves of wonderful mouth watering freshness
A scent that haunts and entices me in all of my thoughts

I feel you
I feel you deep within my heart; my soul
The feeing so intense that I lose and find myself in YOU
A feeling I love for its comfort and security


I hear you
I hear you and my body acquiesces to you
The sound of your soul tuning perfectly to my hearts station leaves me perplexed
A sound that weakens my defenses everytime

I taste you
I taste your sweet delightfulness
The taste of your delectable brown skin that I love so much
A taste that makes my heart soar; my mind stupefied in pure bliss

Seeing, smelling, feeling, hearing, tasting
All the things I love to do
And you, my beautiful surprise; the joy of my world
Envoke every one of my senses
Sending me into emotional turmoil; where everything, and nothing
makes sense.


Peace&&Love.
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Date Submitted: Dec 08, 2008 (09:03 PM)
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  Ms. Smith
12/10/08 (11:50 PM) 
very nice write...i can really understand your emotion in this poem...keep the ink flowin...10 strz (check out my poem common sense)

  *Tha Scorpion*
12/10/08 (10:48 PM) 
You really did a nice job with this, I luv the descriptive nature thru this whole piece, very nice!

  B. Rose
12/09/08 (02:15 AM) 
"I feel you so deep within my heart; my soul The so feeling so intense that I lose and fine myself in YOU" Now that was an ill line.. thats when you know its intenese... this poem was nice for reals... a fave... a simple concept yet you went deeper then that... loved it...

  DGhost
12/08/08 (09:48 PM) 
Nothing but excellence right here. I'm loving the way the words send you into your own state of bliss as you describe each sense in detail. I have a poem called "Taste Is My Favorite", that also involves the senses. Feel free to check it out. And 10 stars, without a doubt.

  MzSpoon aka "T...
12/08/08 (09:15 PM) 
Damn, isn't it wonderful to be heighten by the senses with someone who knows how to turn them on?! I can't help but to understand the magnitude of this write, especially now. Great job.

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