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"EROTIC"
  by BMSN


Why did it take an erotic poem for me to get noticed
Because our society as a whole is addicted to sex we're just hopeless
I could die in my bed while having sex but you wouldn't give a fuck
All you care about is if she came or if i busted a nut
You've gotten me so angry i really will stab you
With this pen that I put down on paper
Salute you, fuck that, I'd rather swallow a tape worm
Or take twenty pills all the date raper
I hate the word erotic because it is me
Twenty years old, militant man, and still im freaky
I bet if I showed you my nine inch dick I would be top member
Your year round fav. poet from December to December
I bet if i showed you how I gripped it when I am alone
You would message me privately to tell me I make you moan
You know what I think it's time that you all get to know me
So get ready for my manhood to showcase GS Poetry
I'll do it to show America's number one topic
Is not life but a damn erotic
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Date Submitted: Nov 27, 2007 (12:56 PM)
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  Ambie
11/27/07 (09:57 PM) 
wow.....i felt the emotion, the tension in this is so strong and i could actually hear you saying this..this was deep...hmm...what will he think of next?

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