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"Essay Of Love In Society"
  by Truessence4u


Love is the most powerful feeling, which a person can feel for another. Another word for love is compassion. In today’s society of sex-erotica it is very hard to find true love. Short-lived gratification is what everyone desperately yearns for. It’s incomprehensible to me why do we all desire to be misused, abused, and penalized against the only logical force known to man. That reckoning force is pain’s next door neighbor, pleasure. Human beings get these fanatical fabrications in their head that pleasure through pornography, sexual-fantasy, strip-clubs, and sexual games are the tenderness, passionate, and comforting compassion that we desire. In actuality, it’s an opaque-downtrodden version of lust turned to raw liquor. A taste so degrading that it creates a vast-wasteful addiction in your soul and you’re turned into a walking carcass.
The love that we should long for is the reverse. In no shape or form, is it harmful to the eyes. It is damaging to the soul. This love will beckon your every waken sense and turn you on fire nevertheless. True love will make you do insane things. I hearken to every open heart to open themselves to their true color and fine this compassionate outreach that will turn your lust filled eyes into an umbrella showered in love.
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Date Submitted: Sep 26, 2008 (01:34 PM)
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  big josh
12/26/08 (10:20 PM) 
yo dat was a very meaningful piece i can dig it, 10s

  .Mase Da Rula.
11/08/08 (12:34 AM) 
agree with kinnard......... my on ly critique is structurally hard to read..... try breakin it into stanza or couplets or line with some spaces so reader can read smoothly...

  The Hood Poet
09/29/08 (07:06 AM) 
wow metaphors were off the chain and this whole poem was jus amazing 10 strzzzzzzzzzz from ya boy HP

  kinnaird
09/26/08 (01:42 PM) 
Powerful piece. the metaphors, the vocab, the message, and the passion that generates from this poem is amazing. definitley got your message across. great use of vision and imagery

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