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"eternal love"
  by ThaTempest


My love 4 u iz ocean deep
When u are hurt my heart iz weak
I've found my love nomore need 2 seek
For u my love can't reach a peak
U hav my love u hav tha key
With u I'll start a family
For u I've fell so clumsily
Baby, will u marry me?

Jus tell me yes nd say it now
And wen u say it say it proud
Ill jump 4 joy and scream aloud
I'm married 2 tha prettiest woman now!
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Date Submitted: Aug 27, 2009 (03:28 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/12/09 (11:09 PM)
Author: Mafiosa
Poem Title: yes..

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comment icon  COMMENTS (26)
  dreamer 1993
09/29/09 (09:35 AM) 
nice short and sweet. very good

  Deandra
09/28/09 (05:24 AM) 
AWWW THAT SO CUTE. WHEN U FIND THAT 1 SOMETIMES U GOT TO GO HEAD AND LET THEM KNOW. NICE PIECE

  Dreshawn
09/21/09 (11:35 PM) 
This poem was very simple...Yes! But sometimes we get so caught up in complexity, That the hardest thing to accomplish are the simple things. I applaud you. And the Flow was nice and to Point. Very Good. Thanks for sharinng

  danceluv
09/18/09 (05:58 AM) 
short but sweet and to the point..i know we all feel this way some point in our lives..nice flow..keep pushin the pen ..ten strz

  sh gurl
09/16/09 (04:03 PM) 
i really lovz this pome babe:)

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