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"Even Through All The Distance....."
  by *Jazique*


Where you are- is where I wanna be
So let me be You and you can be Me
So baby be my Mari J and get me so High
Cuz ur given me all type of sensations that are just makin me fly
You’re my new drug, and you got me Addicted
Got my mind feelin so good & uplifted
You got my mind racin’ none stop
Makin me wanna give you all that I got
Wanting to give you my heart, mind, body and soul
Cuz damn this drug is driven me outta control
Well it’s not a drug, Baby it’s just you
But can’t you see all the emotions you’re puttin’ me through?
Makin my feelings grow deeper and deeper each and everyday
Got me prayin’ to God just to make a way
For us to be together someday
Since we are so far apart now
But through the distance you still make my heart skip a beat, every time that we speak
Baby, I know that you’re tryin real hard
So I’m tellin you to just reach for the stars
Cuz I know you have the strength to reach for your goals
And I’m tellin you now to just reach deep down in ur soul
Don’t let the lil things stress you out, and don’t go on having these doubts
About how things just aren’t getting any better, cuz I promise you will make it through the stormy weather
Cuz there will always be something or someone trying to get in your way
I know you’re goin’ through a lot and tryin’ each and every day (to stay away from the game)
But just take small steps and I promise you today
That you’ll get to where you wanna be
If you just believe
I know that you have been through a lot (You’re a street kid and have been through a lot)
And I’m gonna be here for you, no matter your past
I wanna make this work and I wanna make this last
So give me your hand and let me be your support
Cuz even through this distance I know that we can make things work
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Date Submitted: Apr 11, 2009 (08:33 PM)
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  ~*~itti~bitti~...
11/01/09 (03:32 PM) 
damn, sounds like this one is based off experience. very deep and emotional yet uplifting and inspiring. great write going to read more of your work:)

  Eternal Flow (...
10/26/09 (02:04 AM) 
\" Cuz I know you have the strength to reach for your goals and I\'m telling you now to just reach deep down in your soul\"...one of my fav lines...along with...Damn...Long distance relationships are unbearable...but just the thought of that person...shit...on cloud nine as long as you and the person is close in heart...WOrd...It was a pleasure.....Keep Hitting thee pages with your words.

  Lady M_09
09/22/09 (11:57 PM) 
this is very nice.. i used to feel this way...anyway keep up the good work..doing what you doing..i love it

  ButterflyDream
09/13/09 (07:17 PM) 
awwww....so,so sweet.nicely done:)

  La✮Poet...
09/07/09 (10:25 PM) 
Damn, you just names all the parts of how a long distance relationship can be hard. But if that person loves you, and you love that person, there should be nothing thats hard about the relationship. i mean i understand the physically being there completely cuz ive had my 1 or 2 relationships that were different. but its the mentally the emotionally ties that are strong, and if you have that nothing should get in the way of that. Good stuff here.

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