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"Ever Since You Came Back Into My Life"
  by x 0h bOi itZ jR


Ever Since You Came Back Into My Life
by Jean Roy

E-- Every single one of your promises were carefully disguised
V-- Venomous motives deceived me into believing all your lies
E-- Emptiness took over my organ of love, which before you had filled
R-- Realizing my heart has been corrupted with the walls you helped me build

S-- Selfishly my trust you betrayed
I-- I tried to love you but the feelings of pain just wouldn't go away
N-- Never once did it come to mind
C-- Caring about you would result in you wasting my time
E-- Everyone told me you were still no good

Y-- Yet I remained as loving to you as best as i could
O-- Over are the days that i had no doubts
U-- Unreliable became the words which spewed out your mouth

C-- Conflicted is what we have become
A-- Afraid to admit to myself all the damage you have done
M-- Marriage and a happy life were some of our goals
E-- Emotional scars leaving me unwhole

B-- Buried is my heart under the ground
A-- Alone in silence not wanting to be found
C-- Concise were your plans
K-- Keeping me enslaved and unstable like putty in your hands

I-- I never expected to have my heart shattered
N-- Not from a man who told me that i was all that ever mattered
T-- Through my heart you cut me deep
O-- Overwhelmed with memories and promises you were supposed to keep

M-- My soul by you, has been destroyed
Y-- You played me as if i was your personal toy

L-- Love for me was what you faked
I-- I thought you were true this time, but my assumption was a mistake
F-- Freedom and happiness were again replaced with strife
E-- Ever Since You Came Back Into My Life


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Date Submitted: Dec 09, 2007 (09:46 AM)
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  LiquidFire
03/23/08 (01:12 PM) 
Ok, you must have been readin my mind. Becuz I waz wonderin when I would come across a poem in this fashion. Reminds me of elementary school when we spelled out the words then made a poem for it lol.this is simply the graduated version, lol. This waz precisly on point. I can relate totally. Great first read. Ill be back. Much love. Peace.

  lala008
03/23/08 (10:02 AM) 
hey brotha you tell the truth and you tell it well first off i like the way you chose to style your poem as to spelling it out that was a plus for me at the start not only was the presentation of your write great you had something to tell us you know what im saying im alwas saying i relate to peoples write and its true when life throws you a lot of curve balls its crazy as hell i really loved when you said realizing my heart had been currupted from the walls you helped me build dude thats my ...
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  x--Supa Flurt-...
03/22/08 (09:01 AM) 
Whoa this was really deep, ur really talented and the format was great becuz its normally more difficult to make acrostics rhyme so keep up the good work u r really talented

  Blaque Beauty
12/15/07 (04:22 PM) 
Well done poet this is very well put together. Many of us can relate this is a prime example of you talent I look forward to reading more of your work.

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