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"every second"
A Chainz. and ash_g Collaboration


  ash_g:

slowly,slowly it's passing me by.
every half a second i'm getting closer
to the day I die.
my life's a waste,
but i don't look back and cry..
I just wait....
and get happier as the seconds go by.
every second,
i can see me with out the earth.
every second i see,
what i was never worth.
every second my mom wasted
giving birth to me.
every second,
getting closer,
is the last day on earth for me.

  Chainz.:

every second passing by
got me wondering why
..why on this earth,
this stress is my demise
getting closer to death
but..it makes my happy
n these paths i chose
is just less of exactly
what i was meant to be
n i was left for last breaths
of me, seen dreams come close
but never actually came to me
they're escaping, n there running
pretty fast, n there's no way
i am going to get past
cause I'm a mistake
that wasn't actually suppose to be here
these lucky words i spit
was just a rise of fear, nothing but shit,
but that's all i hear
call me negative, but that's all I am near

  ash_g:

i am near,
every second i see death,
on these last words,
i'm using my last breath.
a worthless life,
a waste of time,
even my words are a
waste of rhyme.
a waste of space,
i'm just polluting the earth.
every second,
i'm happilly slipping away.
every second
something rains on my parade.
i'll be miserable every second.
until the last second,
my dying day.

  Chainz.:

these seconds are closing
..mispronunciation.. closed eyes
lost of concentration
fiend of money..but there's no calculation
countless minutes..of the time i have left
before i see the very limit..of my death
the instincts i don't know if its hell or heaven
or even if there's a after life, I'm striking seven
I'm costing the air loss of space,
but these traces of words are back in place
these minutes are wasting your time
so why am I here wasting my life on crime
cause there's nothing else to do
just 1 life to live
so why should i be here to give
i came here for a reason didn't i
not really..i think it was 1 reason
..n that's to die
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Date Submitted: Jul 07, 2009 (09:36 PM)
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  *Jazique*
07/28/09 (01:59 AM) 
Love the connection & flow of you two together. And I kno I've definitely felt like this, and still do at times...I hate this feeling cuz it's like you're giving up on yourself, life, etc...Nice flow and write for the both of you

  icnicn2004
07/09/09 (07:28 PM) 
I agree with the previous comments. This collabo was nicely done.

  Megn Jay
07/09/09 (05:41 PM) 
agree with the comment above..i liked how u guys picked up right as the other left off and i can def. relate to the situation so thats always a plus keep it up

  Moey
07/09/09 (02:49 AM) 
wow, you two come together and do amzing work. i loved this. flowed together very nicely.

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