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"Every Step"
  by cado astrum


Every step I take is shadowed
The shadows are never far behind
I surround myself with darkness
And a false sense of pride
But the shadows haunt me still
From one corner to the next
The memories and broken dreams
They know no boundaries
I eclipse the sun
When it attempts to shine
But the shadows stalk the darkness
With as much zeal as the light.
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Date Submitted: Oct 01, 2007 (07:50 PM)
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  Sum-Thyng Like...
05/16/08 (08:37 AM) 
amazing

  WarmNillaSuga
05/11/08 (02:04 PM) 
Darkness....shadows....following this soul.....this person? I am going ot have to read this one again.....and again. You are deep and I am going to have to take more time to ponder and digest your words, but youare none the less and extremely talened individual who has so much to share. THIS one right here left me feeling a little depressed.

  Bud Edward
10/02/07 (08:09 PM) 
"I eclipse the sun When it attempts to shine " Amazing... For such a short piece it contains so much within it... it manages to be so deep. It's a gift you possess that's demonstrated by your writings in general.

  Scriptixz
10/02/07 (06:14 AM) 
*shakes head* i must confess when i came through your page last night i couldn't digest your pieces because my mind was still raw with Bud Edward's writes...now i have all the time i need to just delve into your words...such depiction of darkness in this, almost revering it!!! indeed! *nods head* "But the shadows stalk the darkness With as much zeal as the light" *sighs nostalgically* ahhhhh

  cado astrum
10/01/07 (07:53 PM) 
Written July 2002.

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