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"Everyday Us"
  by rhythmicsoul




Im twisted, confused
misguided, unused
yet trusted by all
Im abiding my fall

I worry ‘bout now
while my future I plow
Im stuck here in hell
This earth here I dwell

Gas is so high
limit IS the sky
I keep hope alive
to be better I strive

Which way do I go?
Hell, others should know
Choices are much
so, easy’s a must

I cheat, I lie
I con and I cry
for all the wrong reasons
in all the four seasons

I smile, I cheer
I laugh and Im dear
for all those around me
for more to surround me

im you
im me
im her
im he

Im twisted, confused
misguided, unused
yet trusted by all
Im abiding my fall
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Date Submitted: Jul 14, 2008 (08:27 PM)
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  Knowthyself
04/01/09 (05:38 PM) 
Everyday us!!! you hit the nail on the head on this piece. Confusion...everyday switching up, not really know what we want cuz we desire EVERYTHING. Focus on the task at hand and make a plan and stay steadfast...But the Everyday us is so hard headed. lol Nice write. More ink please!!!

  piss a mofo of...
02/07/09 (06:57 PM) 
58 views and not one comment!! what kinda shit is that! ..'I worry 'boutnow while my future i plow im stuck here in hell this earth here i dwell..'....i'm stuck here too Bruh wishin i was in the hereafter not worrying about this place but it is what it is..

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