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"EYE OF THE STORM"
  by MAVRICK


Dark clouds slowly move in, covering faded and fantasy filled dreams of my youth
streaks of lightening flash, revealing episodes of fiction replaced by facts and truth
doubt, fear, envy, anger, hate all forming meanacing creatures masquerading as faith
who’s that with the two-faces, and that one with the double-cross
oohh, that one with his head bent up his ass, portraying to be a big boss
yogic and tantric postures, excite and stimulate, leaving karma sutric visions
multiplying massive legions of false entities, subtracting my life, creating division
rain starts to fall from the sky, beads of mudd drops fall from my eyes
purging the soil of my inner re-soul-ution, finding meaning for my spirits revolution
thunder creates a ringing in my ears, deafness to tones, not conducive to my home
lightening strikes attack, destroying ill-passioned flames in my cardiac
sizzling sounds like meat in a pan, emerging like a Phoenix, a new Sun, for a new man
flooding my being with a deluge of baptismal fulfillment, instillment of a concealment
never Under-stood the feeling of being reborn in a storm, but in my Over-standing
I THINK ITS BRILLIANT!!!
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Date Submitted: Sep 09, 2008 (01:00 PM)
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  Aya4life
11/19/09 (06:02 PM) 
THAT WAS REALLY GOOD,i really felt the flow,nice write

  Monae'
11/15/09 (11:24 AM) 
Nice ending...though ironic. At first I wasnt expecting you to end it positively...so that was definitely different. Good word choice...you really know how to put a "feel" if u will to the poem. I love your use of imagery. 10 stars!

  Flowet
11/04/09 (10:26 AM) 
Great metaphysical piece some lines i was a little lost then brought back to the surface of this write and i appreciate the talent here it's one worth sharing with the world and change is always good whether for the worst or the better it leads to new opportunities in life and that is always good nah mean sometimes it's a blessing to have change but more often it's difficult to accept it keep painting in those beautiful hues and i'll keep up with the views

  Jazzy Storm
10/21/09 (02:17 PM) 
There is not alot I can say except...I THINK ITS BRILLIANT!!! Very thought provoking scribe, Mav. Keep the ink spilling, poet

  geel
09/30/09 (10:36 PM) 
u r a giant of a man i must say... every word u speak echos loudly like thunder...

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